I Was My Own Route
Julia de Burgos
Summary
‘I Was
My Own Route’ is a poem written by Julia de Burgos, a writer of Carolina.
Puerto Rico, who collected the experiences of a literary writer, journalist and
the freedom fighter. Her poems are full of racial and gender sentiments where
she provokes the equality between male and female and the black and the white
race. She has been also regarded as a contemporary Latino writer who depicts
how the women are burdened with the patriarchal ideologies from the past.
Therefore, de Burgos urges the women to detach themselves from the past so as
to redefine their own identity.
The poem ‘I was My Own Route’ has
altogether 6 stanzas. Each stanza expresses the powerful feelings of the poet
who is always remaining in between masculinity and her own femininity. She
begins her poem reflecting her past feelings when she wished to convert herself
as the wishes of the men. In such acts, she has found a hide and seek game
between her own instinct and the instinct of the patriarchal society. The same
game inspired herself to move forward to investigate a new path that is totally
new for all. Though it is challenging, she joyfully accepted it.
In discovering a new path, she
moves alone mainly to get her internal happiness and a feeling of intimate
liberation. She has described her journey to a new path beautifully where she
faced a serious problem in balancing herself and the truth of the time.
However, she expresses her joy in discovering a new route of her life that has
no history, even she doubts for its future. Anyways she is happy enough living
in the present and waiting for the response of the time. To denote this, she
has repeated a line in the poem. “a game of hide and seek with my being but l
was made of now's”. This refrain has captured the main essence of the poem. The
poem is written in free verse, and it is the perfect example of a poem of the
marginalized community.
Exercise:
Understanding the text
A.
Why did the speaker try to be the way men
wanted her to be?
Answer: The Speaker tried
to be the way men wanted her to be because she was a modern woman and actually
she didn’t like to be a puppet of male ideologies. In fact, she was determined
to fight against the prevailing male domination.
B.
What do you understand by her feet ‘would
not accept walking backwards’?
Answer: The term her feet
‘would not accept walking backwards’ means that she didn’t like to live a life
being inferior to men. She was digging out her own route that could lead the
entire female race in a similar position to men that is the destination of
freedom.
C.
Who are the old guards? Why did they grow
desperate?
Answer: The old guards are
the rigid members of male-dominated society. They behave women as inferior
creatures and dominate them in each and every aspect of their lives. They grow
desperate because Julia was advancing her steps to the liberation of the women
race.
D.
How did the speaker have ‘a feeling of
intimate liberation’?
Answer: The Speaker had a
feeling of intimate liberation by advancing steps forwards to a new route
despite difficulties. Ultimately, she made a separate route separating more and
more in spite of pains from the old route made by males.
E.
Why did the speaker’s desire to follow
men warp in her?
Answer: The speaker’s
desire to follow men wrapped in her because she sensed the rigid rules and
regulation imposed by men on woman. She wanted to become independent, enjoy
freedom and happiness, and utilize her own potentials which were suppressed by men
ideologies that is why she twisted them.
Reference to the context
A.
What does the speaker mean when she says
she was playing a game of hide and seek with her being’?
Answer: The line “she was
playing a game of hide and seek with her being” appears in the third line of
the first stanza and is repeated in the last stanza too. Hide and seek is a
game played by the children in which one player is blind folded, other players
hide in different place and the blindfold is unfolded and he or she finds the
other places from the hiding places. “A game of hide and seek is also used as
an idiom which means a situation in which one is constantly evading or avoiding
partly the other. In the poem, the line a game of hide and seek with my being
means that the speaker is trying to avoid the norms and limitations set by
males to females. Men wanted her to be a woman defined as by them but as a
modern and rebellious being, she was evading males.
B.
Why, in your view, was her back ripped by
the old guards as she was advancing forward?
Answer: The Speaker says
“At each advancing step on my route forward, my back was ripped by the
desperate flapping wings of the old guard” in the second stanza. She was
walking ahead on the path of women’s liberation challenging the chains of male
ideologists. She was advancing forward the desperate flapping wings of the old
guard was pushing her back. The limitations and chains of patriarchal
ideologies can be found as the old guard was obstructing her on the way forward
intimate liberation of women race. In her advancing steps forward, the old
guard imposed several threats to her.
C.
What, according to the speaker, did it
feel like to be free?
Answer: According to the
speaker, she felt being free is like getting cherished liberation. It is like
she won independent identity being free from all kinds of social norms and
limitations imposed on women by the men.
D.
Why does the speaker prefer the present
to the past?
Answer: The speaker
prefers the present to the past because the situation of her past was
miserable. She was one of the victims of male domination. Her family background
was not so good. Even one of her siblings died of malnutrition. She was living
under the shadow of a male-dominated society. But in the present, she has
become an iconic person, a pathfinder, and a savior of the female race. She has
set a route for all the women who can walk freely pursuing their own identity.
She feels proud of herself and deserves the homage.
E.
John Donne, in his poem “No Man is an
Island”, says, “No man is an island entire of itself.” Would Burgos agree with
Donne? Do you agree with Donne or Burgos?
Answer: John Donne
(1572-1631) is an English poet and is considered the preeminent representative
of the metaphysical poets. He is also famous for his quotes. The quotation,
“Noman is an island entire to itself” is taken from his poem “Noman is an
island” which means that no one is truly self-sufficient. Everyone must rely on
the company and comfort of others in order to thrive. Donne believes in
co-existence. Every man is a part of the whole entire population. All humans are
an equally integral part of the collective group of humanity. We must value and
respect all lives. It is said that “a man and a woman are two wheels of a
cart”. The cart can’t move ahead if one wheel is broken. Burgos wanted to avoid
male’s existence in terms of getting liberation to women. Males and females are
equal, and the co-existence of males and females shapes a balance in the
society. Her concept is impractical in reality; it is just a way to express her
race against males.
Reference beyond the text
a. Write
an essay on My Idea of Freedom. Answer:
My idea of freedom
A freedom, what a wonderful word!
How much energy there is in it! How much opportunity, dream, even believe that
only we ourselves determine our capacity to do something, to achieve new
horizons, to acquire new skills.
I am sure that each and every one
of us has his or her own definition for this word. Someone believes it to be
somewhat ephemeral, unachievable. But somebody has it like a deliberate way of
life and for others it is a goal they crave it with all their heart.
So, what is the enigma of this
seems to be a simple word? What is freedom? And what is importance of freedom
in our life.
To me, freedom means to be able
to learn from my mistakes. If I didn’t have freedom, I would have to do what
the top authorities always tell me to do. I don’t have any room for mistakes so
it would be harder to learn about life.
Freedom also means having the
time to do things right. No freedom, in this case, would mean that I wouldn’t
have any time for fantastic, clever thoughts. I would have to do things
extremely precise and quick. When I don’t have freedom, I am under pressure
constantly. While I am under so much pressure, it makes it a more stressful
world to live in.
One last example of my idea of
freedom is being able to do many things without being forced into doing
anything. No freedom means that I might have to enlist in the army reluctantly.
I might even be forced to quarter troops and watch them take over my home! If I
didn’t have freedom, I might have to get married at a young age and start a
family which I have no intention of doing at my age. My life minus freedom
would equal being controlled with everything. When I don’t have freedom, I can’t
do anything except for what the strict laws tell me to do.
In summary, we are lucky to be in a society of freedom. Just remember, we are the land of the free and the home of the brave!